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The Difference btw. you and me by ~Okami-Seishou:iconOkami-Seishou:



                                   We're different
                                       You and I

                                  You lead, I follow
                                You're found, I'm lost
                           You have hope, I have doubt
                          You bring joy, I brought sorrow

                             You smile and have friends
                               I frown and am all alone

                        You carry pride and determination
                     I carry hoplessness and broken pieces

                                     You have faith
                                    and are trusting

                                        I have fear
                                    and am skeptical

                                I'm empty, You're whole

                  So why do you continue to play this game?


                              You go out of your way
                                     to talk to me
                               I ignore and abandon
                                       the topic

                                I run away from you,
                                 You chase after me

                           Why are you so persistant?

                                A bet perhaps,
                                   Some money involved?

                           You shake your head and grin.
                            Your eyes filled with a feeling
                                      I don't recall.

                           You step forward, I step back
                                 You reach, I recoil

                                           Hurt
                                           And
                                       Confusion


                                  I don't understand
                                  These Confessions
                                    of a word called
                                            Love

                                How are you so sure?

                           What makes me this so-called
                                            "one"
                             This makes no sense to me

                                         No matter
                                         what I say
                                             Or do
                                     You never give up

                                    I fall and stay down
                                 You trip and get back up

                                     Don't you see
                                    we're oppsites?
                             So then why can't you see,

                        The Difference Between You and Me
©2008-2009 ~Okami-Seishou
:iconokami-seishou:

Author's Comments

this is a poem i made in tech. class. it was funny really. i dont see myself as much of a romantic writer. nor did i thought my emotions and words would lead to this. this is also dedicated to :iconblade34:-kun. hope this answers your question.

Thanks and lots of love
Okami :dygel:

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:iconshinjiite:
Stunning. Beautiful. I relate to it so well. *favourites*

--
'Your' and 'you're'
are diff'rent things,
when seen misused
it makes me blink.
Just like 'they're',
'their' and 'there,'
it makes me want to
tug out my hair.
So learn the language,
play the game
so that we may
all stay sane.
:iconokami-seishou:
thank you. im glad you like it so much :dygel: :D

--
What is seen isn't always what is there.

What is there isn't always what is seen.

You laugh at me because I'm different, I laugh at you because you're all the same.

When all goes wrong....... blame Sasuke!
:icontsukikothewolf:
oooohhh, this is so good! :giggle: i love the contrast between the two :D :+fav:

--
I'm not quite sure what to put here, but... if you like post-apocalyptic stories about human-animal hybrids and dystopian floating cities, then....um....please check out my gallery :D
[link]
:iconblade34:
I don't understand. What do you mean?

--
I'm the holder of the Dream Blade, and I will always win because good will never lose to evils wrath.
Hooray for Earth « Earth based quote
:iconunderthebelljar:
Very nice, interesting form and flow to it. I love it.

--
"It's because everything must end, that everything is beautiful."
:iconosox:
this is sooo beautiful love it! :+fav: it! :)

--
Una sonrisa endulza el Corazón y alivia el alma :D

My gallery/[link]
kick ass design. [link]
:iconvioletphantasy:
What a beautiful poem. There's so much emotion to it.

--
doи'т вє scαгed тo ғly αloиє
ғiиd α pαтн тнαт is youг oши
:iconoxcereal:
Like salt to my moose...sugar to my diabetic dollar...prophylactic to my cold member...the plasma to my Type B...and the
roots to my canines.


This poem touched me...down there.

haha.

--
God is the natural world, and he has no personality.

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